Will Dockery
2017-11-18 08:55:30 UTC
Apple Montage
I was sneaking around
smoking menthol
among the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
I stood near
as a crowd
watched my father and Uncle.
They were cooking apple butter
stirring the brown gunk
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
Breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn
then to be breathing
the hot misty steam
.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of these trees.
And other trees
behind those trees
past a field.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
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I want to work on this one a while more, but that's a first draft
for the Sunday Sampler.
For me, the story is told...almost has a feeling illegality..withI was sneaking around
smoking menthol
among the sheds.
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
I stood near
as a crowd
watched my father and Uncle.
They were cooking apple butter
stirring the brown gunk
boiling in a huge black kettle.
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
Breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn
then to be breathing
the hot misty steam
.
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
There were several
of these trees.
And other trees
behind those trees
past a field.
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
-Will Dockery
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I want to work on this one a while more, but that's a first draft
for the Sunday Sampler.
young eyes watching that scene of the crime...I like it as is...more
might destroy that feeling conveyed...but like I said, thats me..
J
another..lost a bit of spark...after the third piece, I barfed. For me,
poetry can be like that....get the job done, convey the message, leave a
visual..and hit the road...Jack :-)
enjoyed that one every bit as much and wanted a third ... but my mother had
only baked two pies.
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I never have cared much for the taste of pumpkin, nor do any of my local
friends from this area... I suspect that pumpkin is a northern thing,
similar to the boiled peanuts here.